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-New Finngolian settlers illegally entered the Alempois territory of Finbeland and clashed with forces of the free state, who succeeded in driving out the finnvaders.
+New Finngolian settlers illegally entered the Kovanje territory of Finbeland and clashed with forces of the free state, who succeeded in driving out the finnvaders.
 ===== Background =====
-Settlers from New Finngolia landed in Finbeland, the former colony of the [[nations:koviofreistaat|Kovanje Vrystaat]] now under administration of the Republic of Alempois.
+Settlers from New Finngolia landed in Finbeland, then a colony of the [[nations:koviofreistaat|Kovanje Vrystaat]] (now under administration of the Republic of Alempois).
 ===== Before The Battle =====
-Khan Kovio and kr1sto95 faced the intruder, venomthrope. When he geared for combat to stand his men, the two Kovanje citizens took flight however. Scornign them cowards, the Finngol leader demanded satisfaction, and proposed the PVP arena at the old spawn as the site of the confrontation, for the conflict to be resolved in an honourable duel between him and [[peope:kr1sto95|kr1sto95]]. He waited in vain, and finally he [[memes:mod_abuse|teleported]] back to Finbeleland.
+Khan Kovio and [[people:kr1sto95|kr1sto95]] faced the intruder, venomthrope. When he geared for combat to stand his men, the two Kovanje citizens took flight however. Scornign them cowards, the Finngol leader demanded satisfaction, and proposed the PVP arena at the old spawn as the site of the confrontation, for the conflict to be resolved in an honourable duel between him and kr1sto95. He waited in vain, and finally he [[memes:mod_abuse|teleported]] back to Finbeleland.
 ==== The First Battle ====
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-The Boer forces awaited the savage horde in full combat gear, and thus the two armies engaged. The battlefield moved from the fields of Finbeleland into the woods—a tactical disadvantage for the army of Alempois, which relied heavily on artillery support. venomthrope thus succeeded in taking out kr1sto95. Having rid himself of the curtain fire, he concentarted his forces on Kovio, and killed him.
+The Boer forces awaited the savage horde in full combat gear, and thus the two armies engaged. The battlefield moved from the fields of Finbeleland into the woods—a tactical disadvantage for the army of Kovanje, which relied heavily on artillery support. venomthrope thus succeeded in taking out kr1sto95. Having rid himself of the curtain fire, he concentarted his forces on Kovio, and killed him.
 During the battle, a fearless [[people:p_p_a|war reporter]] also lost his life. rib ;_;7
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-Kovio and kr1sto95 had successfully asserted Alempois' claim to Finbeleland, and no Finngol was ever sighted in the region again.
+Kovio and kr1sto95 had successfully asserted Kovanje's claim to Finbeleland, and no Finngol was ever sighted in the region again.
-After the famous battle, a great **Mongol Divider** was built, to keep the Mongols from invading the holy lands of Alempois.
+After the famous battle, the territory fell to the reformed Republic of Alempois, which seceded from Kovanje. The great **Finngol Divider** was built, to keep the Finngols from invading the holy lands of Alempois.
 === Reactions ===
 The songs of the Kovanje Vrystaat glorify the victory wrought from the hands of fate that day.